Let me just say
You got major bonus points on this one.
I don't know if this is your first real animation but I aplaude you. The brilliant part (I find) is that you have tried your hand at making the mouth movements match your dialogue (which was well done),and that is something at a higher level of animation.
Now that you have both basic and intermidiate animation skills, try working on the backgrounds and the overall graphic quality. I know it is hard, learning animation ( I am myself a beginner in animating) but I know you can do it. You have a brilliant animator future ahead of you and I hope you will continu making funny animations and maybe eventually games.
That might be the nicest comment I have EVER GOT!
p.s or not hmmmmm?
Tweeks here and there
The animation was given good details and the way the characters moved was very realistic, even for stick figures.
The only problems I have with these animations is that most don't last long. I know this is your first, and it is splendid, truly, it is better than some who have been animating for months or even years and I praise what you have done.
However, your next titles should be a bit longer. Albeit the aditionnal effort and time, you can truly make a name for yourself as an animator.
Also, I like this style of animations, simple but effective, but there should be more highly-detailed backgrounds. This could allow you to use the environment as a weapon as well rather than just energy bursts or swords!
One last thing; the text. I don't know if you mispelled a few words here and there by accident or because english isin't your primary language but as your animations get more sophisticated simple mistakes like ''my'' instead of ''me'' will annoy people, trust me. Also, make thedialog a bit longer, not in term of content, but in time. Most of the text was displayed for a perfect time, but others were short. So short they only seemed there to add words.
All that said, keep up the work, you have a great amount of potential!
oh yeah im spanish xD and thank you for criticism ;)
Though this is short,
Even if the animation is short it still is in the spirit of madness. I hope you plan on making a longer version, I know you can achieve a lot. Even moreso you said that it was a test! I congradulate you, even if this was easy,hard, short or long to make.
Looking forward to the extended version!
the full version will be in made..;p
In fact it's a decent game. These ''shoot to get to your goal'' game tend to get repetitive quick and need to constantly better themselves. The physics work well enough to be smooth and the simple graphics do the job.
However the controls are not of the caliber of the better games in this genre. To click to get your power and angle, maybe difficult as it is, is MUCH better than what you have implemented.
However, I salute your attempt to make a game, you have potential and keep making games and sharpen your skills with (i hope) is constructive cristicism from my part and the part of other newground reviewers!
Cute and simple
There has been a blast of simple kids games lately and I find hard to start my sort-of-reviewing games and animations ''career''.
That said, I like the simplistic art and controls. A very kid-friendly game with a medium difficulty curve. I found the game to get harder a bit too fast, especially that you cannot control the fall or jump of your squirrel.
There are only but a few things I would change;
1- Controlling a bit the path your squirrel jumps, just to give the player a bit more control
2- When a new squirrel arrives, he could start a bit smalelr to the others and start to grow. This would just add sort of ''the walk of generations'' kind of thing. But that's just me!
All in all keep making games which are more intricate than the last one and never give up, good job!
Simple yet fun
I give credits to anyone who can make a flash game, even a simple one like this.
This is one of the simplest games i have ever played yet it was fun, the time it lasted. I have nothing else to say but congrats, and keep up the good work!
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