Let me just say
You got major bonus points on this one.
I don't know if this is your first real animation but I aplaude you. The brilliant part (I find) is that you have tried your hand at making the mouth movements match your dialogue (which was well done),and that is something at a higher level of animation.
Now that you have both basic and intermidiate animation skills, try working on the backgrounds and the overall graphic quality. I know it is hard, learning animation ( I am myself a beginner in animating) but I know you can do it. You have a brilliant animator future ahead of you and I hope you will continu making funny animations and maybe eventually games.
That might be the nicest comment I have EVER GOT!
p.s or not hmmmmm?
Tweeks here and there
The animation was given good details and the way the characters moved was very realistic, even for stick figures.
The only problems I have with these animations is that most don't last long. I know this is your first, and it is splendid, truly, it is better than some who have been animating for months or even years and I praise what you have done.
However, your next titles should be a bit longer. Albeit the aditionnal effort and time, you can truly make a name for yourself as an animator.
Also, I like this style of animations, simple but effective, but there should be more highly-detailed backgrounds. This could allow you to use the environment as a weapon as well rather than just energy bursts or swords!
One last thing; the text. I don't know if you mispelled a few words here and there by accident or because english isin't your primary language but as your animations get more sophisticated simple mistakes like ''my'' instead of ''me'' will annoy people, trust me. Also, make thedialog a bit longer, not in term of content, but in time. Most of the text was displayed for a perfect time, but others were short. So short they only seemed there to add words.
All that said, keep up the work, you have a great amount of potential!
oh yeah im spanish xD and thank you for criticism ;)
Though this is short,
Even if the animation is short it still is in the spirit of madness. I hope you plan on making a longer version, I know you can achieve a lot. Even moreso you said that it was a test! I congradulate you, even if this was easy,hard, short or long to make.
Looking forward to the extended version!
the full version will be in made..;p
Simple animation but I liked it!
I'm pretty sure ytou have you basics now, all you need to work on is maybe more detailed nackground/envorinment and a little more detail characters (not costime-wise but in movability and the likes).
Good job, don't stop animating!
I read that you wanted to animate space and landscapes, which was done in a simplistic yet effective way. I don't know how much time you spent creating the space background or animating it, but it was well done (because it isin't that easy to make a believable starry night sky). All in all I found the landscape to be a bit bare. Our scaly friend could have also been a bit more detailed since we see it for a bout 80% of the animation. I like the idea behind it.
Please continue to make original flash videos!
I really enjoyed this flash. Thought maybe not of the highest caliber of ''graphics'' it was still enjoyable to watch and I found it highly detailed. Rare are the flash movies that have action and humour and turns out to be pretty good. Sound quality was also good, not perfect but it's hard to fit awesome music in high quality and sound in a small flash file.
Keep up the great work!
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